This is a profoundly moving piece. The way you capture the exhaustion of human endurance, damning both weakness and fortitude, is incredibly honest. That transition into the "sacred space" at the end is breathtaking. Thank you for sharing such a raw, transcendent glimpse into the soul ✨
Brilliant piece
Thank you so much. I appreciate you reading my poem.
This is a profoundly moving piece. The way you capture the exhaustion of human endurance, damning both weakness and fortitude, is incredibly honest. That transition into the "sacred space" at the end is breathtaking. Thank you for sharing such a raw, transcendent glimpse into the soul ✨
Brandi Lynn, thank you so much for this wonderful feedback. Your description of what you go out of the poem is inspiring to me. You really got it.
The soul finds eerie ways to endure, crawling even when it stands still.
It is an anvil and suffering is the hammer.
When you overcome pain, that state is truly sacred. Beautifully written, Stephanie!
Thank you, Rea! I appreciate the comment.
Such a fantastic, deeply resonant write. You have expressed this state so well.
Thank you so much!